Wonderful photo.I'd just keep the last line.
Thanks, George.The picture was taken from the ferry when it was at full speed. Just point at the moon and the racing water, and shoot.Yes-a weak haiku. Point at the moon and the racing water, and shoot.
See I am becoming more sensitive. On this evening I crave the image.I read the comments. Now I appreciate both Haiku, whereas before I didn't notice even when you said, "Haiku".
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Wonderful photo.
I'd just keep the last line.
Thanks, George.
The picture was taken from the ferry when it was at full speed. Just point at the moon and the racing water, and shoot.
Yes-a weak haiku. Point at the moon and the racing water, and shoot.
See I am becoming more sensitive.
On this evening I crave the image.
I read the comments. Now I appreciate both Haiku, whereas before I didn't notice even when you said, "Haiku".
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